Wednesday, 22 April 2020

Writing


5 comments:

  1. Good writing Bede, I like how you've described the sourroundings. Do you enjoy this kind of writing?

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  2. Hi Bede
    You have described this picture very well. What made you decide to choose this picture? Do you think it would be fun to ride an ostrich? I think it would be a bit scary!!

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    1. No I don't want to ride one

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  3. You have been very observant with this picture Bede. There are lots of things to discover in this picture. Did you get to choose the picture yourself or was it given to you by Mrs Long? I wonder if you looked at the picture again if you could see anything else.

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